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The Greater Manchester Spatial Framework Does Not Help Citizens

In this expository essay, a student discusses the usefulness of the Greater Manchester Spatial Framework. The student argues that the framework does not truly solve many of the region's problems because the plan caters to developer interests instead of citizens' needs.
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Angela's feedback:

"You put together a thoughtful analysis of the Greater Manchester Spatial Framework, and your main point about the framework's flawed approach to future development is easy to understand. However, there are a number of distracting writing convention errors that should be addressed. If you're going to introduce an abbreviation (by including it in parentheses after the relevant term), the abbreviation should be used from that point on in your work. If you're not going to use the abbreviation, there's no need to introduce it at all. You can just write the term out in full throughout your work. Compound modifiers should be hyphenated when they appear before a noun (e.g., "site-specific enhancements"), and consistently using either single quotation marks or double quotes would give your essay a neater look. Moreover, indenting the first line of each paragraph by half an inch would facilitate the reading experience for your audience."

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