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"This is very detailed and well-organized. The primary thing to improve is your spelling and grammar - there are a number of instances where you typed a similar word to the one that you meant, but it's not quite right. Double-check your formatting as well; there are a few inconsistencies.
I can't tell if the headings in this are separate questions for your assignment, or if they're supposed to be sections of a larger cohesive paper. If they're for an overall paper, I would recommend making them flow better from section to section - add an introduction that talks about what the rest of the essay will go into, and create a conclusion that wraps everything up."