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The History, Qualities, and Qualifications of Pediatric Nurses

This essay describes the role and history of pediatric nurses. The student outlines the qualifications required for the field and expresses their interest in becoming a pediatric nurse.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bob's feedback:

"You have a strong introduction, and your information is organized well. To improve your essay, it would be a good idea to focus on transitions between paragraphs, as the topic changes are abrupt. The shift into second-person ("you") in the paragraph about qualifications is jarring and should be changed. There are some errors in grammar and sentence structure that should be addressed before submitting (pay special attention to the final sentence of your introduction paragraph). In terms of formatting, your in-text citations and indentation also need attention; some of your citations don't match the Works Cited entries, and in MLA, there is no need to italicize authors' names."

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