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The Impact of Buddhist Beliefs on Health Care Practices

This essay discusses Buddhist beliefs and their role in a health care setting. The author gives an overview of the Buddhist faith, family beliefs, how Buddhism looks at different health practices, and why the author chose this religion.
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K's feedback:

"Your purpose is clear, but you may want to start the essay with a stronger first sentence. You should place the idea that understanding Buddhism is important to health care providers at the very beginning of the first paragraph. Your essay contains a lot of interesting information about what Buddhists believe. Can you perhaps tie more of this information to how health care workers can better help patients? For example, you mentioned how Buddhists do not like to take medicine and then noted that it is important to you as a nurse. Please draw connections between other facts, such as how the belief in suffering might impact health care. This paper is easy to read and well-organized. There are some issues with grammar and punctuation that you should address before submitting this paper. For example, there is an extra period that appears between "way" and "(Aich, 2013)". You indicated that this essay was formatted using APA style. There appears to be some inconsistencies in the application of this style."

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