The Importance of a Business Plan for a Successful Business
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"You have created a neatly formatted essay which is easy to read. You have also presented the points in your essay in a logical manner and created smooth transitions between new ideas, making the information in the essay easier to comprehend. When reading your introduction and conclusion, there appears to be a disconnect in your paper. It is not clear whether the focus of your paper is supposed to be about a business plan or business funding. To help with giving your paper direction, make sure to include a thesis statement in your introduction. Your conclusion also lends to further confusion because it is unclear if this is supposed to be an informative essay or a reflective essay. Use the conclusion as an opportunity to summarize the main points made in the essay and reiterate the goal of the paper. You have included a lot of useful information in your essay but there are no citations. Make sure to cite anything information that you obtained from another source to avoid plagiarism issues. Last, make sure to neatly and consistently format your references according to whatever style you are supposed to be using."
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