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Happy Birthday to you Happy birthday to you Happy birthday dear Trina Happy birthday to you YAY OnetwothreeI blew out the eight candles on my sky-high birthday cake Hooray shouted everybody in the whole dining room I was so fortunate because the whole family on my dads side was here to celebrate with Everyone inside was so squished Literally everyone was only allowed to move a square inch or else the room would explode in seconds There were just too many people in the room This party should have been held outside Although the party dcor would not be as festive outside as it was inside Group picture said my dad while he was setting up the camera My cousins were able to squeeze through their way towards me There was only ten seconds for the whole family to regroup and pose Everyone say Happy Birthday Trina said my dad who managed to speak through his frozen grin Happy Birthday Trina says everyone with excitement TickTickTickSnap Ah I love my familyFamily is not an important thing Its everything-Michael J Fox Family means love communication trust understanding being together and caring for one another Family means everything to me I am fortunate to be a part of a very huge family there are literally too many to count Family is not always about living under the same roof nor is it about saying good night to each other when the lights go out It is about looking forward to the next time we can spend together Its for remembering special times weve already shared before-Cali Brooks Most parents support their children care for them nurture them listen to their problems and overall sacrifice everything for them I am so fortunate to have such wonderful parents My parents encourage me to strive to be successful and they push me to work hard They comfort me and they bring out the best in me My mom is hardworking
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