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The Importance of Family Values in Shaping Future Generations

This personal opinion piece proposes the disintegration of traditional family values, citing its impact on children as an urgent issue that needs attention.
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Bridget's feedback:

"As a personal exploration of the idea, this is working well. The writing is strong, clear, and well-organized, and you keep the focus tight. The main rhetorical mode here is largely oriented around ethos; the good mechanics and sound organization are major parts in creating this connection with your audience. However, even in a piece that is personal opinion, incorporating outside sources helps with persuasiveness. To take this to the next level, I suggest supplementing your personal observations or experiences with cited evidence (statistics, studies, trends) to help widen the context and reach a wider audience, including those whose own stances may represent the counterarguments."

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