scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 468
In the year twelve hundred forty-three what is now Conwy Castle previously Dolwyddelan Castle was captured by King Edward I of England This was an important military victory and in the next 5 years major fortifications would be made to make the castle look close to what it looks like today While the fortifications were being made two English serfs from Rhuddlan Castle visited Now these two serfs were just ordinary serfs with the education and life skills that their parents had provided for them They were traveling to a neighboring town and they saw the fortifications being added to the castle and were intrigued Their conversation as they looked at and watched the fortifications being added was quite intelligent for serfs of their time I dont see why we need to stop and look at these fortifications being built It is just another castle getting more fortifications so that the nobility can protect us even more than this awful life of a nobody John declared outraged Garion replied This is probably a mark in history that we can say we were at even if we dont go down in the books as being here Do it for posterity If not for yourself your childrens children may be happy to say Our grandfather witnessed the recent additions to this castle and Im proud he took the time to do it John replied back in a scoffing tone Garion why must we look at this castle thats better than ours Rhuddlan Castle will never be better than this one I think King Edward should fortify our castle as well Why must you question the King John Garion shot back It is not as if loyalty has gotten me anywhere but in the fields John heatedly argued Let us stop arguing This is not getting us anywhere Garion said as he finally gave in to the hopelessness of preventing John from becoming worked up Think about it
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA