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"I appreciate this writeup for how the reader can sense the enthusiasm and engagement you have with the text. This connection and use of ethos and pathos makes them interested in reading the book themselves, and your exploration guides them to it as a text with deeper meaning.
I do want to check in on the project at hand, as this reads more like a discussion post or response. Is this the appropriate form for this piece of writing? Or will you be moving into a more formal presentation to meet a prompt? If this is the case, some elements (like wondering if people wouldn't like the book as much) might not be the best way to get at the analysis because it presents on something the book is not, rather than on what it is. You can also move into a more rigorous mode by shifting away from diction like "probably" or "may have been"--instead, let the claims and argumentation speak for themselves.
Whatever form this essay takes, aim for a polished final draft. I spot a number of errors and awkward moments that are a little confusing: use a proofread to catch and fix these--you want your reader's concentration to be on the ideas, not in deciphering errors."
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Kibin. (2024). The importance of magic in bless me, ultima by rudolfo anaya. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-importance-of-magic-in-bless-me-ultima-by-rudolfo-anaya-51SPFD7z
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