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The Importance of Resilience in the Army

In this informative essay, a student talks about the importance of resilience in the army. The student defines what resilience is and describes how it can be cultivated within an individual and a squad.
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Angela's feedback:

"You cover the topic of resilience well within an Army context, and you created effective transitions from one paragraph to another. However, run-on sentences such as the first sentence of the essay and sentence fragments such as the one that starts “Being able to” should be recast to improve the flow of your work. In addition, standard practice in academic writing today is to include one space only between sentences; the practice of including two spaces is considered outmoded. Semicolons have been used inappropriately, and your comma use should be revisited as well. Ensuring the first line of each paragraph is indented by exactly half an inch would give your work more polish."

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