The Importance of Understanding People in Pride and Prejudice and The Kite Runner
This analytical essay examines Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen and The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini. The student gives a synopsis of each novel and discusses the importance of interpersonal understanding.
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"You've demonstrated a solid understanding of both Pride and Prejudice and The Kite Runner. Your analysis of the themes in both novels is insightful and well-written. However, your discussion of both novels strays away from your thesis quite a bit. For instance, you spend quite a bit of time discussing which characters exhibit the titular traits in Pride and Prejudice. This derails your essay somewhat since it takes the focus completely away from that of your thesis to discuss a point that is of marginal importance to the idea of interpersonal understanding. Since you are focusing on the importance of understanding people, it would be a good idea to expand on the consequences of Elizabeth's and Mr. Darcy's failur to understand one another. If understanding is critical, the idea that they "would have realized [their love for one another] earlier" seems like a small consequence. Likewise, while the themes of responsibility and atonement are important in The Kite Runner, they do not tie directly into your thesis. You might consider either revising your thesis or shifting the supporting paragraphs to more directly support it. Finally, consider having the essay looked over for errors in grammar, word choice, punctuation, and capitalization."
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