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The Industrial Revolution and the Communist Party of Great Britain

In this research essay, a student discusses how the Industrial Revolution led to the formation of the Communist Party of Great Britain. The student explores how working-class people, the proletariat, suffered as a result of innovations in manufacturing.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a good job of explaining how the Industrial Revolution caused the formation of the Communist Party of Great Britain, and most of your essay is well written. However, the term “Industrial Revolution” should be consistently capitalized while terms such as “century” and “capitalism” should be kept in lowercase when they occur in the middle of a sentence. Careless errors include the insertion of two periods at the end of a sentence and the use of “lead” instead of “led.” When a parenthetical citation appears at the end of a statement, no period should be placed before the closing quotation mark. Instead, the period should appear after the parenthetical citation only. Typically, a piece of location information (e.g., a page number) is included in the citation for a direct quote. The phrase “outside in” does not need to be hyphenated while “working class” should only be hyphenated when it’s functioning as a compound modifier preceding a noun (e.g., “working-class problems”)."

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