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The Influence of War on Relationships Based on The Song of Achilles by Madeline Miller

In this analytical essay, a student discusses how war influences relationships using The Song of Achilles by Madeline Miller. The student provides examples of all sorts of relationships, including those between a parent and child, lovers, friends, and enemies.
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Angela's feedback:

"You put together a thorough analysis of the different types of relationships that are affected by war, and you make good use of the examples you pulled from The Song of Achilles. One recurring writing convention issue concerns your use of pronouns. The word "one" should be paired with "one" or "one's" instead of "them" or "their." There are also many points in the essay where you fail to show the possessive form of a word: "Achilles's words" is needed in place of "Achilles words." Square brackets should be used instead of curly brackets to show alterations to quoted material, and double quotation marks should be consistently used as the outermost set of quotation marks for relevant content. Remember to include a citation for all directly quoted material. When you have a parenthetical citation at the end of a statement, the period is placed after the citation itself instead of before the closing quotation mark. There are also some typos, including the use of "there" instead of "their" and "Ajak" instead of "Ajax.""

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