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A gush of tears at grandparents farewell kiss a touch in my throatwhen the pilot started the plane and the bright curious and eagergirl boarded on the plane on January 18 2010 leaving to the landfilled with the promise of endless possibilities--the United StatesGrowing up in an urban city I enjoyed the irresistible chaos of abustling city life hucksters cry above the traffic noise along thestreet and the garish neon light beacon the sky until midnight Themetropolitan life setting changed the mode when my family rented a smallapartment in the city of Poway a quiet place with virtually no soundmade at night besides the chirping of cricket and the croaking offrogs How many nights I quietly lay on the carpet floor contemplatingon how lonely in this new land I was As time cycled on more problemsaroused My college-educated parents former educators were forced tostart the life from a scratch My amicable Dad grew grumpy as hestruggled to find a job my parents once happy union became everythingbut united as they argued more frequently In this trying situation Ibegan to confine myself in my own world However this bleak momentturned out to be valuable as I seized an outlet for my musical pursuitsthrough choirBeing successfully selected into Womens Ensemble helped me regainself-esteem As an amateur singer I begrudgingly noticed how advancedmy peers were Despite the fact I independently took on challengesfully embracing carpe diem Serious progression in singing didnthappen overnight and I soon enlisted in my own personal Choir trainingboot camp utilizing every second that I could find to practicelistening to different pitches on my way to school and asking my peersto correct me when I was out of tune I cannot remember how many days Igot out of bed while the world was still asleep and started practicingOh Wha-T-Beautiful-Day until my lips dried up Moreover the heavyworkload from school and the responsibilities I took at home such ashelping my parents pay bills or accompanying Dad
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