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Overcoming Mount Redcloud Rise and shine shouted Joanna as she pulled the curtains back What the hell time is it Jordans thought process wasnt so great at this hour She rolled over and pulled a pillow over her head 530 exclaimed Joanna and yanked the pillow out of Jordans arms You mean they have one of those in the morning too Jordan moaned Joanna giggled Come on sleepyhead You can take a shower first so you can wake yourself up Youll need it She looked around the room for a few seconds Here Youll need these too She said as she tossed Jordans hiking boots over to her side of the hotel room Joy Jordan thought Another fun-filled day of hiking up that hideous trail with the icky tarantulas and huge scorpions as well as other crawly creatures She was a city girl and her and The Great Outdoors didnt get along very well They just couldnt see eye to eye Jordan was a girly girl and wasnt a fan of hiking adventures and creatures and getting dirty Joanna on the other hand was very competitive and very athletic She was the cutest little half Korean girl with adorable chubby cheeks but nothing could stand in her way She loved doing outdoorsy-type stuff with her dad The only thing they had in common was that they were both 15 and they both played the trombone in the high school band together But they had been best friends since Joanna had moved to Jordans high school at the beginning of the past school year And this year on her familys summer vacation to Colorado she had invited Jordan to come along with her and her dad and her sweet little Korean mom Oh yeah The authentic Korean food That was a big enough adventure for Jordan in itself Much different than any other Asian food she had ever experienced But apparently it wasnt enough for
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