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I have reached the end This is it I am standing on a narrow bridge facing reality and leaving behind the worlds and castles that my thoughts have created As I escape my imagination I see the empty reality that awaits me A reality filled with darkness and sorrow with no means to escape from I am cold and filled with nothing but emptiness and pain By destroying the worlds I have built in my imagination I have led to the destruction of my own reality I have drowned in another world that is neither for the living nor for the dead A terrifying world that made me drift away from both my imagination and my real reality It is the world that sadly occupied every part of my life It is the new world of the internet That world made me kill the passionate child writer in me and made me watch as she slowly dissolved into ashes and disappearedIn my pure colorful childhood I loved to write However I was neither gifted nor talented I had nothing to offer the writing world other than love I loved each word I read and each word I wrote fed the passionate child in me but that child was never satisfied As an eight year old child I saw many flaws in my writing that I am unable to explain I was my own critic and I was a harsh one I didnt believe that my writing had any hope of living on As I saw it my writing was most of the time defected and included multiple problems Therefore I left it for a period of time I gave up on the child writer in me and watched her sleep for many days Although I gave up on that child my literature teacher didnt One day she assigned my 3rd grade class a writing assignment we had the opportunity to write how we
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