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"Phrases that have acronyms, such as AIDS and HIV, typically are not capitalized. Today AIDS is not necessarily fatal. You should check that fact. You needlessly write a sentence in all capital letters, and you include no space before the next sentence. You write "high large," which makes no sense and is essentially redundant. You should place a comma before and after "i.e." You include a long list on page 2, which, while not incorrect, is a poor layout. You should write the list in paragraph form. Your conclusion includes a comma splice. Please look up this term and make appropriate corrections. You convey some good information and advice, but you should provide sources. This is always good practice, and it is particularly important here, as you are providing vital medical advice."
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