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The Inventions and Art of Leonardo Da Vinci

This essay describes the life and achievements of famous painter and inventor, Leonardo Da Vinci. The author details some of Da Vinci's more famous inventions, such as the flying machine, the robot, and the revolving bridge, and describes Da Vinci's innovative approach to design and art. The author also talks about Da Vinci's most famous painting, "The Mona Lisa," and how this has influenced generations of artists that followed.
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Amanda's feedback:

"Each of the presented arguments is strong and well-supported. I also enjoyed your thesis and found it to be consistently reinforced by the material you presented. One issue with this paper is wordiness or awkward wording that sometimes makes it difficult to read. For example, the first word of the paper is "fathom," which is a word rarely used today and "Imagined" would be a more relevant and modern word to use there. Another issue with this paper is punctuation -- in some places it's missing and in others it's added when it's not needed. Another issue that you need to address in order to improve your grade is making sure your conclusion isn't just a direct repeat of your introduction. They are very similar and it feels too referential of the first paragraph. Instead, summarize your points in one or two sentences and then go on to talk about his influence today and into the future -- this will help give you paper a more complete feel. Finally, I would strongly recommend reviewing MLA guidelines before submitting this paper, as the header, in-text citations, and references all need tweaking to conform to MLA style."

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