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The Involvement of America in the War in the Middle East

In this book summary, a student discusses America's War for the Greater Middle East by Andrew Bacevich. The student explains why Bacevich believes the United States has been wrong to try to solve problems in the Middle East through military means.
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Angela's feedback:

"You put together a thorough summary of Bacevich's book, but since your essay is focused on one work in particular, you should introduce the book by title in your opening paragraph. While it's good that you provide citations throughout your essay for material taken from the book, a more specific piece of location information (such as a page number) should be included for directly quoted material. Double quotation marks should be consistently used to give your work more polish, and revision is needed to take care of any situations where you have a closing quotation mark but no opening quotation mark. Proper nouns such as "Middle East" and "Carter" should always be capitalized, and awkward phrases such as "all region of" and "there one thing" need to be edited for clarity of expression."

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