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I Introduction A Attention Getter By a show of hands how many people in this classroom are under the age of 21 As you look around the classroom you will see that many of you are under this age Now think to yourself even though you are under the age of 21 does it mean that no one in this classroom has ever tried alcohol According to Prof Rosenberg from the Psychological Bulletin 1993 alcohol is the most serious problem facing teenagers B Link to Audience We are all students at college and most likely gone to one party with alcohol C Speaker Credibility Being a college student and under the age of 21 I have researched this topic of underage drinking because I thought this issue would be extremely beneficial to all of us since we are in college will most likely be going through experiences involving alcohol D Thesis Sentence Today Im here to convince you to think twice about picking up that next bottle of alcohol E Preview of Speech First I will to talk about why teenagers should not have alcohol Next Ill discuss why teens are not responsible enough to drink and lastly Ill explain how alcohol is not good for your health Transition Lets begin by talking about why teenagers should not have alcohol I Main Point 1 A Underage drinking is illegal in all 50 states 1 The tolerance that police have to a teenager drinking and driving is absolutely zero 2 Most parents who find out that their child has been drinking are not pleased with it 3 Underage drinking is a crime It is a first-degree misdemeanor punishable with a maximum sentence of 6 months incapacitation and a 100000 fine B Not only is underage drinking against the law but it is endangering the persons life as well as others especially on college campuses 1 As you can see on this survey from the George
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