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The Issues Caused by the Increasing Aging Population in Japan

This essay discusses the simultaneous issues of an increasing elderly population and low birth rate in Japan. As aging persons begin to make up a larger percent of the population, Japan is seeing the beginning of several problems it will need to address.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is an interesting problem. You've done a good job of presenting the reasons that the increasing aging population presents problems for Japan. Your essay could use some attention to clarity issues in addition to frequent repetition. Make sure you explain how the aging population contributes to the problems you mention. Consider working with an editor to address awkward sentences and paragraph structure.

It may be a good idea to mention that the birth rate is declining earlier in the essay as this is an integral part of the problem."

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