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The Luxury Hotel Industry and Ecotourism

This essay is about the luxury hotel industry. The author highlights how the Covid-19 pandemic has negatively impacted it. The author also suggests that shifting the industry's focus to ecotourism could revitalize the industry due to protecting the natural environment and supporting a sustainable economy.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Your research paper is off to a good start. Since it is apparent that your work is in the planning stages, I graded it accordingly.

Although your writing starts with an introduction that explains your topic, it does not end with a clear and concise thesis statement that guides the rest of the paper. The thesis statement should outline what concepts the reader should expect to read about in the body of the paper. Adding this thesis statement will also clarify the purpose of your essay and allow the reader to know if you maintain focus on that purpose throughout your writing. Based on your abstract, introduction, and outline, your paper is off to an excellent start. Some points are elaborated on more than others, so consider eliminating this imbalance. I also do not see any citations in your introduction or abstract. It is important to cite information that you got from another text to avoid plagiarism issues. Finally, I marked that you do not have a conclusion based on the outline. Make sure that you include a conclusion that summarizes the main points you made in the body of the paper and relates them to the introduction. Overall, your essay is very well-formatted. There are only occasional spacing issues at the beginning of paragraphs. The biggest problem I saw was the use of writing conventions. There are many grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation errors that impact reading comprehension.

As you continue with your writing, I advise that you have someone proofread your work and provide you with specific feedback that can help you improve your writing in this area."

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