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Two years ago I was 5 feet 3 inches in height I had long black hair And I was very skinny Upon seeing me people assumed that I was nave innocent shy and quiet Filipino girl They were rightHowever these all changed last year Being the timid non- outgoing person that I was I wanted to try new and different things For once in my life I didnt want to be responsible or innocent or nave looking I needed a change I had my haircut short streaked with bright burgundy I also started to go clubbing every night I tried drinking and smoking I even tried marijuana one night in Griffith ParkHowever the transformation I underwent was not me My friends and I were not used to my exciting new lifestyle At Goodwill Industries where I used to work my co-worker Lisa once told me Why are you doing that smoking marijuana Youre every parents dream Youre responsible well -mannered and polite to everyone I could not believe that you want to waste your bright future that lies ahead of you just because of that thing Finally I woke up when my little sister Kathrina told me that I should not be doing those things She even threatened to tell my parents Thank God I listenedIn my case I was stereotyped as a good little Filipino girl It may not found terribly bad but there were negative effects Because of my curiosity I took a chance doing unpredictable things No one knows what to expect from me Therefore it would be wise for people to not stereotype other people or to assume things about them
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