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The Many Aspects of Human-Dog Interactions

This essay discusses the roles of dogs in human life. The student notes that dogs can improve human health and happiness and even assist in wartime.
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Bob's feedback:

"I may be biased because I love dogs, but this is a solid essay about an often overlooked topic. Your paper has a logical flow and covers several different aspects of the human-dog relationship in good detail.

Your introduction seems to focus on dogs in military service, but you cover much more ground than that. Make sure your intro is comprehensive and mentions the full scope of what you'll be discussing.

The section about soldiers with PTSD feels like it veers away from the discussion, and it's only several paragraphs later that you return to the discussion about dogs. While it's fine to give some background on the issue, consider starting this section with a topic sentence that mentions that dogs can have a significant impact. That way, your reader will know that you will be circling back to your main topic.

The essay appears to be unfinished, so make sure to end with a solid conclusion."

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