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The Many Benefits of the Stacking Tower Toy for Infants

In this informative essay, a student discusses stacking tower toys and their benefits for infants. The student explains that playing with a stacking tower allows an infant to develop motor, visual perceptual, and cognitive skills.
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Angela's feedback:

"You provide a very informative discussion of the stacking tower toy. Moreover, you included a rich description of the toy in your introduction for those who might not be familiar with it, and the overall organization of your essay makes sense. There aren't many sentence structure issues, but there are a number of places where terms should be hyphenated since they're working as compound modifiers. Regarding other grammar and punctuation problems, you use the semicolon incorrectly, and your word choice is off with the use of the word "inquire." Still, you end the essay on a strong note with your conclusion and mention of the toy's affordability."

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