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The Many Physical Changes in Adults as they Continue to Age

This research essay provides information on the changes that take place in adults, including outward appearance, bodily systems and individual differences.
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Christina's feedback:

"Well done ensuring the reader understands that you will be focusing your essay on the changes that take place in adults, including outward appearance, bodily systems and individual differences. To ensure each paragraph/section is fully fleshed out and you are fully supporting your main points, let’s make sure you are writing at least five sentences per paragraph. When writing your paper in APA format, let's make sure you are reviewing your guidelines for appropriate placement and format of your header, your abstract (if you have a section for it, it should be included), your in-text citations, and ensuring all of your paragraphs are indented appropriately and in a uniform manner. You would benefit from a round of editing to ensure all issues of subject-verb agreement, punctuation, sentence fragments, and capitalization are resolved before submitting your work."

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