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Throughout grades sixth through ninth I believe that I have grown tremendously as a writer When I read my writings from ninth grade then read my writings from sixth grade I think I was such a bad writer back then My writings were very plain and sometimes did not make much sense My vocabulary was horrible I used very plain words and I used words over and over again Vocabulary has always been a struggle for me In middle school I would want to use big words to make my writing sound better but I did not always know how to use them When I did use them I would use them the wrong way or they just wouldnt fit in with the sentence or paragraph that I was writing There would be a bunch of plain little words then one big word right in the middle of the sentence In one of my writings I do not use great vocabulary until the very end of the writing Throughout the writing I am using the same words over and over At the end I decided to throw some big words in and I came up with Whenever you are scared and nervous just think of my story and hopefully you will overcome your fearfulness and nervousness Using these words at the very end of my story makes it look really bad Vocabulary is one of the things that I have grown in as a writer Another thing that I have noticed in my writings are my introductions and conclusions In sixth grade I did not write conclusions or introductions at all I would just have one big paragraph that should have been broken up into much more paragraphs I did not begin my writings with any opening I just started telling my story The end of my writings just stopped There was not a conclusion to sum it all up In another one
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