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One night I was looking straight at the stars while I was lying down in the balcony They are quiet it is weird because they always tend to talk to me The moon looks at me but she does not say anything What is happening Am I not interesting to them anymore I dislike this situation I want to talk to them I want them to be my secret-holders I hear noises close to where I was There are people playing but I dont seem to know them Then I started asking to myself if I really know me who I am and then I realized I am a persistent a spontaneous and a jealous girl There are so many ups and downs in our lives but for these causes good or bad one should not give up or let them go If one does not feel like battling for getting his or her wish or objectives there is not place to go Everyone knows life is not easy life has so many downs well and at least my life has had Since my mom sickness car accidents parents problems decisions responsibilities dreams that could not turn out to be true how I wished however I am still battling I have not given up Because I know what happened to me it have not been the worst things ever and if they have I am still having hope Being persistent for me is to be in love with our dreams If I fail there is one way to continue and this is easy just to stand up that is what I do keep going no back up Other tip in my life it is being spontaneous that I agree sometimes has been good sometimes has been bad I have always expressed myself with that immediacy I usually talk first not thinking in the consequences society says being spontaneous shows that we trust who
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