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Ive never had anyone to look up to no one in my life as a true role model Many of the women in my family would tell me You need to go to college If not youre going to need to learn the words want fries with that The only thing is none of my aunts actually had a college degree except one my aunt Francis My aunt Francis is the one person in the world who I admire Shes the only person in my family who has survived what Im going through graduating college My aunt Francis was born in a small town in Texas She was the youngest of seven sisters I remember talking to her one day and she said to me I knew by the time I was sixteen it would all be up to me One by one I watched my sisters fail out of college and consequently get kicked out of the house Now everyone in my family was looking at me to succeed and everyone else around me expected me to fail just like my sisters As my aunt told me this story I felt my eyes well up and eventually I could feel a warm tear dripping down my face I understood every word my aunt was saying You see Im the Aunt Francis of my generation My cousin who graduated in 2010 got pregnant and didnt go to college and she now works at Wal-Mart My cousin who graduated in 2011 went to college but then dropped out and ran off with some boy My cousin who graduated 2012 flunked out of college she received not even one credit Last but not least my cousin who graduated the same night as me well he was working at McDonalds but now he just sits at home and plays video games Its like the cycle was repeating itself now Im the one
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