The Need for Keeping Peace in the Future in Reference to NATO

This opinion essay discusses two different approaches to securing global peace in the coming decades: a realistic approach and a liberal approach.

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"Overall, I think you have a good start to this essay. You have some great little nuggets of ideas throughout your essay, however, they get a little lost in the flow and organization of your essay. Your final paragraph almost seems more like an introduction than a conclusion. You are missing a thesis for your essay, but you have a bit of one in that final paragraph. I would suggest thinking about what the main focus of your essay is and then trying to structure a thesis around that. What are your main arguments for and against the two sides? What are your main arguments for the combination of the two sides to promote world peace? It was also a bit unclear as to what the main focus of your essay is. It seemed as if you were discussing the two sides, but then, you shifted to giving your own opinion. Make sure you denote the focus in your thesis, because it will help clarify a lot of the questions your reader might have. I would also divide up your paper into different sections discussing the two sides. In the paragraph in which you talk about both, it became very confusing and hard to follow which side believed what. That all being said, you do have a lot of great ideas. You just need to spend some time proofreading and editing it to fine tune a lot of those ideas. "

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