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Bridget's feedback:
"You introduce a number of interesting ideas and points here; as you move into future drafts, your goals should focus on organization, clear statement of purpose, and ethos via more rigorous and clear use of sourced evidence. Your paper makes use of anecdote (possibly ethnographic ?) that will particularly depend on the presentation of your ethos as a researcher and writer.
As regards clarifying the purpose, I recommend using a reverse outline to get a bird's eye view of this current draft; this information can help you consider how to ensure paragraph order best guides the reader in the next draft. For example, how does the discussion of prejudice (opening lines) fit into the rest of the paper? Once you have determined this, think about whether placing it in the very first sentence best focuses the paper's purpose immediately for your reader."
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