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I am reaching I am extend myself as far as I can so that I can grab the next ledge that will lead my towards the bathroom Everything is dark Bang My hip slams into the door of the bathroom The bruise is forming before I take enough baby steps to place my fully through the threshold of the door Stumbling as I cling to the sink my first reaction is to look up into the mirror Depression swallows my heart as I remember that I have lost my sense of sight Completely blind I stare into a face that I will never see again My blue eyes stay pinned forward as I turn the knob on the sink With two fingers I test for the perfect temperature Too hot Too cold I cant find the lukewarm feeling that Id like My roommate Jess is at the end of the hall way listening to music on her laptop and from what I can hear no ones in the bathroom other than me Tears well up theres no one here to help me It took me so long to get here to begin with I cant even fathom walking back down the hall to get Jess My cheeks become wet and I wipe my nose on my shirt sleeve finding a tissue would take way too much work I remember the days before I was blind I remember the days when I was greedy and I thought that sight way something to be ignored and taken for granted I remember the days when I honestly believe that there wasnt a beautiful thing around I would kill now just to see the hot and cold on sink knob I love to know that I was walking in a straight line I would love to see my eyes to know what I looked like I will never be able to look at myself again Everything I do is
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