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What is so amazing about smart phones that the world cant get their eyes off of them Some people may say it help them keep track of things Others might say that their phone only causes distractions and slows down everyday processes Wake up people Smart phones are an addiction On average people check their phone 10 times in an hour span ADD STRONG THESIS STATEMENTThis pocket-sized computer is making people so unproductive because social media is constantly available From personal experience it is difficult to get off Facebook to study write a paper or complete homework I know Im not the only one that experiences that Everyone loves seeing what everyone else is doing with their life instead of focusing on their own life Those that rely on smart phones might say that Social Media keeps us connected to friends and family which it does then again so does a phone call or a lunch date People would get a lot more done with out the distractions of Social Media Smart phones cause simple everyday routines to be postponed due to all applications and messaging People are constantly looking down at their phone multiple times of the day walking to class or driving to work We could get a lot more done if we kept our phone at home in our office or somewhere safe Just like the old days if someone really needs to get in touch with us they will leave a message right There is no need to always take our smart phone out to check the latest news do online shopping check twitter or even comment on the most popular post on Facebook That is what personal time is for not while at work or class COUNTER ARGUMENTSmart phones interfere with productivity at work For example when I get that one message about the plans for the night and all my friends are messaging me about it Instead of working
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