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The Nuclear Arms Project and Its Risks and Dangers

This is a persuasive essay in which the author writes in support of eliminating nuclear weapons. The author specifically identifies cost, proliferation of nuclear weapons to other nations, an undemocratic concentration of power, and risk of nuclear accidents as reasons for eliminating them.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job providing context for your paper in the introduction. You also ended the introduction with a clear thesis statement that gives direction for the rest of the paper. There is one point in your thesis that you identified and it is not clear if you supported it in the body of your paper. There are a number of grammar and spacing issues throughout the essay that need to be resolved. There are also some sentence structure errors that lead to improper logic. This is most specifically seen in your conclusion when mentioning the disarming of weapons. You did a great job citing and referencing your resources. Just make sure that references are no more than double spaced. "

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