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There has been many people in life that has help me get where I am today Whether it was when my brother talked me into playing three sports in high school My teacher always sticking by me in school so I can graduate And my parents by being strict and not letting me get into any trouble All of my problems there has been someone to help me dealt with my problems Getting into high school my brother told me to keep myself busy Because he knew I didnt like school and by playing just one sport it wasnt going to be enough to keep me in school everyday So he talked me into playing other sports The sports that my brother played were football basketball and baseball My brother told me by playing those three sports it kept him on his toes With school especially it made him get good grades so he can stay on the team So I did I played all the same sports my brother played in school It worked I stayed in school got ok grades enough to keep me on the team It also got me high school athlete of the year My teacher in high school and besides sports is what kept me going to school My teacher always stuck by me while I was in school He always challenged me into doing my work Motivating me to go to class and always helping me with my work I never really missed school because if I missed school and my Teacher found out he would call my parents He was like a best friend I was always in his class talking about any problems I had My teacher was really a big reason why I graduated from high school I didnt want to let him or my parents My parents are a big reason why am I am where I am today By my parents being strict
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