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The Perfect Date

This is a descriptive writing piece that highlights the writer's experience when he was on a date. The author details how the date appeared (wearing chino shorts and Keens), the weather, the car ride (Aston Martin convertible), the bike ride, the view of the meadow and pond, and the picnic (chardonnay, lobster tail skewers, provolone, brownies) made perfect by L.L. Bean.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This is a very well-written piece. While it is not a traditional essay, it still has a clear introduction and conclusion that leads to a well-organized body. The language you use is so descriptive and vivid that the reader feels like they are right there with you. There are no errors in the formatting of your paper, which enhances the clarity of the paper. There are a few minor punctuation errors scattered throughout the writing that you should resolve, but other than that, this paper is excellent."

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