1. Home

The Positive and Negative Effects of Religion in the United States

In this expository essay, a student discusses the role of religion in the United States. The student provides examples to show how religion makes both positive and negative contributions to society.
PAGES
2
WORDS
1,112
  Cite
View Full Essay
About this essay
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley
Generating Preview...
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley

View other essays like this one:

Angela's feedback:

"You provide a balanced discussion about religion's positive and negative contributions to life in the United States, but some of your examples are not as compelling as others. For example, your discussion of religion teaching people valuable life lessons would be more effective if you highlighted specific teachings that impart good values to people. It is unclear at the moment how teaching people about the afterlife gives them good morals. Using words such as "teach" multiple times in a sentence can make your writing repetitive, so where possible, sentences should be recast to vary up your vocabulary. The title of a book should be italicized, and when mentioning a piece of literature, you should also include the author's name for reference. There are also some issues with verb tense, as seen with the statement "Religion had implications.""

Learn more about this feedback