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My anger I started thinking about the assignment that the teacher gave us last week The assignment was if I could change something in my character what would it be I talked to some of my friends my roommates and I thought about my past few months I realized that the thing that causes me some problems is my anger They were true and I thought true to My anger is the only thing that I have to change in my personality I have to change this character because it causes me a lot of problems with most of my friends The reason that makes me think about converting my hard character to a calm and soft one is what happened to me before coming to United States Last time I met my girl friend we fought about a very stupid thing We had an appointment at 5 PM and she came about 10 minutes late I got very angry When she came she found me sitting on a small wall in the street looking face down I saw her but I remained silent When she spoke her first word it was like if she opened a worm can Unexpectedly I started shouting on her face I was very angry that I couldnt realize what I said What I said was very hard that caused her pain and later made me suffer for a long time We were planning to marry each other We had a lot of things to do together and lot of sweet plans I broke the most beautiful and important relation that I had because of my stupidity or in other words anger We had a very sweet and lovely memory that causes me pain each time I remember them Since that day I decided to fix that problem because I made a decisive decision about it I still having this problem but I am trying to get rid
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