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I am a unique cultured self-assured compassionate and impassioned individual I have learned to reach for the stars I posses many qualities that have earned me the respect and admiration of my peers and educators Throughout my High School experience I have gained many assets and attributes I have attained numerous characteristics and qualities that I feel would contribute to the University of Florida I know that I am a natural born leader People tend to look up to me They know I am dedicated to whatever I commit to and will put my best foot forward Throughout the many leadership positions I have held I fine that people want to see confidence They want a person who isnt afraid of speaking their mind in an intelligent manor Being aware of this I decided to get involved in Student Government Besides fighting for the concerns of students I wanted to help get rid of the negative preconceptions of my primarily African-American High School Although we are a F school learning does take place and we hold education in high regard One particular initiative that I instituted when I was the Junior Class President was to get the class involved in fundraising for the senior prom and our senior year It helped us raise the necessary funds to have a not as stressful senior year Another organization that shaped my leadership skills is the World Renown Jones High School Concert Choir Being a member of the Jones High School Concert Choir gave me an opportunity to enrich myself creatively and expand my cultural arena By visiting palaces search as Atlanta Nashville Philadelphia South Dakota Mount Rushmore and Washington DC Ive been an Alto Section leader since 10th grade This position allowed me to develop my artistic integrity and taught me to appreciate music and life
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