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The Power of Choice: How Online Communities Impact Identity

This essay considers the impact of online communities. The student focuses on how online communities have caused a shift in how we perceive identity, with modern humans more likely to identify as members of like-minded communities rather than identifying based on nation-states.
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This essay received an A by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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MJ's feedback:

"This essay is well-written; there are almost no errors in terms of conventions, and your argument is both interesting and factual. Further, you utilize a range of good sources to provide support. There are some issues with your citations, however; for instance, you have formatted your footnotes with author surname followed by author given name, but the given name should actually precede the surname in a footnote (e.g., John Horrigan instead of Horrigan, John). Only in the bibliography does the surname come first. Be sure to review Chicago conventions and revise accordingly. There are also a few places where you have included phrases or words in quotation marks, but there are no corresponding footnotes present (see your introductory paragraph for some examples). If you are quoting information, footnotes need to be added; if you are using quotation marks only for emphasis, though, consider removing them, because otherwise the source of the material is confusing to the reader."

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