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Ouch je je Im telling mamma I yelled in agony rubbing the imprint her book left on my headNo youre not she wont believe you Im older snickered my sister and with that she ran up the crowded walkway which in the morning hour looked much like a stampede of bulls As I walked toward school I listened to the distinctive chatter of my fellow civilians smelled the exhaust fume filled air and listened to the bells and whistles of another pristine day This was Beijing China on another busy workday no time to talk money is to be made there is always somewhere to go and some place to be It seems that this is the ideology of all Chinese as I looked ahead all I can see is a sea of black hair moving from side to side up and down in unison everyone trying desperately not to drown I tread toward the edge of the curb and am taken into a world of raging machines streetcars bicycles and automobiles racing down the street carrying even more people to some important place I see a void in the racetrack and take a chance to run across the street to school I am in my last year at Mao Tse-Dung Middle School it is full of long maintained rivalries between its top students all of us are supposed to be the best we are to make our families proud in any way possible and build a prosperous future because our parents and previous ancestors worked so hard so that we could have this exclusive chance I have always been an exceptional student always attending the after school classes and always being at the top of my class in all the major subject categories After the examination when my fellow students and I had swarmed the student standings list I always would read my name in the top three endlessly hearing criticism from my competitors
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