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The topic I chose for my persuasive essay is should we keep drinking commercials on TV In my opinion we shouldnt The companies that make and sell alcoholic beverages advertise their products on the TV and radio in newspapers and magazines and on billboards These pictures show men and women having fun and relaxing with friends while drinking These advertisements tell viewers that if they want to have fun and be seen as handsome or pretty they should drink alcohol The advertisers want to send the message that alcohol is more than just a drink it is a reward that people give to themselves and friends They should take the alcohol commercials off of TV and out of magazines etc for a number of reasons Most all kids watch TV Not all channels now have alcohol commercials on them but the ones that do underage young women and men watch So the names and looks are exposed to under the age of 21 young adults So why do we need to keep alcohol commercials on TV on the radio and in ads We all know it exists we know the names so why do we continue to advertise them They took away cigarette commercials and most statistics show that alcohol kills an equal numbers of deaths as cigarettes do I went through some magazines and there were alcohol and cigarette ads in everyone except magazines containing the word teen or something that had to do with home and garden The alcohol and cigarette ads were in car magazines sport magazines and just typical fashion magazines Even if its not adsits something about alcohol Some teenagers have their celebrity idols but some of them are big drinkers or even alcoholics themselves And in the magazines they talk about how they are The magazines dont say its bad but they also dont say its good Like Ben Affleck and Matthew Perry they both were alcoholics
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