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The Reasons Why I Want to be a Labor and Delivery Nurse

This is an informative essay in which the author discusses why they want to be a labor and delivery nurse. These reasons include the job's income, the social interactions they will have on the job, and the working conditions. The author goes into detail about the education that they are going to receive and the aspects of the career that are appealing to them.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job going into detail about why you want to be a Labor and Delivery nurse. There are a couple of places in your paper where the transitions between ideas seem awkward. This type of issue should be resolved by creating transitional sentences and phrases that create a stronger relationship between ideas. Similarly, the organization of the overall paper does not make logical sense to the reader. Since you created a list of what you are going to talk about in your focus statement, your paragraphs should cover those ideas in the exact same order. There are a number of MLA formatting issues. For instance, when you use direct quotes, your citations should include page numbers. In addition, make sure that all of your text is the same color. Labor and Delivery is presented in the paper capitalized, not capitalized, and abbreviated. Make sure that you present this title in a consistent manner. Last, there are a decent number of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation errors that are distracting to the reader, so be sure to resolve these through editing or proofreading."

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