The Reasons Why I Want to Study Law and Why I Would Be Good At It

This is an essay that the author wrote as part of an admission application into a law school. The author goes into detail about past personal experiences that have led to their passion for law.

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"You have done a great job explaining the experience you have in regards to learning law and why you have a passion for it. You have also done a great job formatting your paper making it easier for the reader to read and comprehend. I would suggest that you make it clear from the very beginning of the paper what the goal of the essay is. This can be accomplished by writing an introduction that describes what will be in the body of the paper and a clear thesis statement that guides the body of the paper. There is also a lack of coherency throughout the document. Oftentimes, it is not clear how you shift from one idea to the next. Consider creating transitional sentences and phrases between various sentences and paragraphs to build relationships between ideas. Last, there are a number of grammar and sentence structure errors that make some of the text confusing. Make sure to resolve these sorts of problems to improve the piece."

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Kibin. (2025). The reasons why i want to study law and why i would be good at it. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-reasons-why-i-want-to-study-law-and-why-i-would-be-good-at-it-96FL5llD

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("The Reasons Why I Want to Study Law and Why I Would Be Good At It.")

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