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Kibin. (2024). Developing efficient organizational control systems. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/organizational-control-systems-aKSvjvqS
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"This paper has good information that is hard to discern due to complex, confusing writing. Concision will clarify concepts and facilitate understanding, by both the reader and the writer. For example, the first sentence on page 2 should say, “In as much as …,” but the real solution is to delete most of the first line and rewrite the rest. The paper omits the name of the article it discusses, which is essential information. It is good practice to include a serial comma in lists, as many formats require it. The introduction says various things about the characteristics of an organizational control system. It does not define the term, and it should. The first paragraph ends with the phrase “and hence enhancing,” but “enhances” matches the other verbs in the sentence. Also, a comma is needed to set off this clause. Both errors occur more than once. It is good practice to avoid contractions. This essay includes one header. In an article of this length, this is best deleted."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). Developing efficient organizational control systems. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/organizational-control-systems-aKSvjvqS
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