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The Role of Leaders in Improving Nepal

This is an opinion essay about how leadership in Nepal can improve the country. The author believes that Nepal is only poor because it is unorganized and unmanaged. The author suggests that leaders need to repent because of their mistakes and win back the trust of people. In Nepal, entrepreneurs struggle to set up businesses, and the country does not harness as much electricity as it can. Politicians reject hydropower projects, playing dirty politics. The author suggests introducing investor-friendly reforms to lure multinationals and bring lucrative jobs. The author also suggests launching youth self-employment programs. Nepal continues to move down the Corruption Perception Index, and leaders need to make more of an effort to support democracy and prosperity.
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"Overall, this is a decent paper. You have included excerpts from sources to support the points you are making. You have also written an introduction that communicates the purpose of your paper, and your conclusion lets the reader know that you stayed focused on that purpose. Since there is factual information in your essay, I suggest you cite any information you got from sources to avoid plagiarism issues. I also recommend that you end your introduction with a clear and concise thesis statement that lets the reader know exactly what they should expect to read about in the body of the paper. Last, the conventions of the essay need a decent amount of work. There are a lot of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation errors that need to be resolved to improve the flow of the paper."

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