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Social and Technological Factors that Facilitated the Reformation

This essay on Martin Luther describes three main conditions that helped ensure Luther's ideas would become a revolution: the dissemination of information thanks to advances in printing, growing dissatisfaction with Rome's political and financial corruption, and external political situations (e.g., Henry VIII).
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Bridget's feedback:

"This essay moves efficiently and quickly through the discussion, and you round up the main points clearly. Consider a topic sentence for the second paragraph that signposts you will hit up three reasons by the end of the paragraph ("Three main reasons were..."); while this may read as stylistically flatfooted, the speed at which you need to move through these points means the reader will appreciate the guidance up front.

On another note, I suggest clarifying "it" in "Without it" (second sentence of the second paragraph); the reader eventually understands this refers to printing, but specificity will, again, help the reader move more efficiently and confidently through the discussion, amplifying persuasiveness and communication."

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