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Prompt Has the hair on the back of your neck ever stood up due to fear fright or anger When WhyRecently I spent a week of my summer vacation in West Virginia with my family We enjoyed doing many fun activities such as zip lining tree climbing and white water rafting Our last day in West Virginia we went white water rafting Our group had seven people in one raft plus our guide There were also five other rafts following the same path as our raft Some of the rapids we went down were known as Class V rapids meaning they were highly intense paddling down Our guide told us that there was a risk of falling out of the raft in the high intense rapids He explained exactly what we should do if we did fall out Either we swim towards the left or the right depending on the part of the trip we were on The guide had told us so much information at once it was almost impossible to remember what to do if we got in a bad situation My mother was the most frightened person out of forty people I have never seen someone so terrified She was extremely nervous of falling out of the raft and also scared of my brother falling out Of course on the most dangerous rapid of the trip my mother falls out Instantly my heart stops She had fallen under the raft so I could not see her I then believe that she is drowning or something and as a lifeguard I wanted to jump in the dangerous water and try to find her Finally after a good ten seconds I see her pop out of the water I am relieved yet still very scared that she will not be okay She ended up getting back into the raft perfectly fine I should have known that she was going to be okay the
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