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The Significance of Edvard Munch's Work in Between Shades of Gray

This essay discusses the book Between Shades of Gray. The student describes the effect of artist Edvard Munch's work on the character Lina and how it helps her process her own emotions and eperiences.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've done a good job of expressing how Munch's work affects Lina. Since this is the focus of your paper, your introduction should focus on that aspect. The introduction can be a little confusing since you jump between focusing on Munch and Lina. Consider adding a statement that directly draws the connection between the two before bringing Lina into the discussion.

You should identify Edvard Munch by his first and last name when you first mention him. This is less important for fictional characters such as Lina.

Be aware of the length of quotations you use from the book. Long quotations can lose the reader and can often be shortened without losing relevant information.

You should provide appropriate context for readers who may not be familiar with the book. For example, the significance of the NKVD building should be explained the first time it is mentioned."

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