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"The Soul of Capitalism" by Robert Collins and "When Canada Met Andy" by Nancy Tousley

In this analytical essay, a student considers how the dairy farmer Hap from "The Soul of Capitalism" by Robert Collins would react to Andy Warhol's art as presented in "When Canada Met Andy" by Nancy Tousley. The student argues that Hap would not have understood Warhol's art or its value.
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Angela's feedback:

"You stay on topic by discussing how you think Hap would respond to Warhol's art, but your introduction could use more work to help the reader better understand the two sources you're referencing. For example, you should note their authors and the nature of each source (e.g., whether it's an article or a short story). While you've incorporated many direct quotes, it stands out that you have not provided citations for any of the quoted material. As such, it is unclear which source you're referencing at any given time. In terms of writing convention errors, the beginning of a sentence should always be capitalized along with proper nouns such as "Hap." Phrases such as "meant to mean" are awkward, so whenever possible, synonyms should be used to improve clarity and avoid repetition. Although constructions such as "would of" are okay in everyday speech, in academic writing, you should say "would have.""

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